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This has been an awesome experience and I hope to do this more in the future (hopefully I'm not too busy to finish this tri-o-logy or whatevs)
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Hmm, It was a nice comic, good story telling, but not for me, I leave this story feeling sadder than I did when I started it. quite significantly more so. And to be honest, its kinda ruined the whole string of comics for me.
But again that is just me, It's a good comic, loved the art, you did nothing wrong, though that ending felt kinda rushed, forced even, out of nowhere, and I get that may have been to just push the point of "you don't know what could happen", It's just not for me. I'm overly empathetic.
But again that is just me, It's a good comic, loved the art, you did nothing wrong, though that ending felt kinda rushed, forced even, out of nowhere, and I get that may have been to just push the point of "you don't know what could happen", It's just not for me. I'm overly empathetic.
Amazing comic. Love everything about it. Yes it sucks that Isaac died, but not every ending is a happy one. I still have fun with this comic and enjoyed it very much. Love your art style and love the characters. You say there is going to be a third? Hooray. I imagine it's their wedding right? Either way best of luck and have fun 😋💛💙❤️
The comic really... only left me feeling really depressed, in part because of what happened to Ivan.... but also it made me think, it made me ask myself what I would do if either me or my partner end up in... a situation like that, he is the most important person on earth to me and just... imagining losing someone you care about like that is.......... I know tragedies happen all the time, I know not everything ends exactly the way you want and I know life is not pink........ but is not grey either, which is why I'm so sick of seeing tragedies here in FA all the time...
I know a lot of people have mentioned it already (and I'm a couple pages late), but the spit take really threw me for a loop. It might just be that I normally associate that with a sort of "Yeah right, you expect me to believe that?" type of surprise, not sure.
That said, I really enjoyed the comic for the most part,even if Isaac's death was sad. It just didn't feel like it was working up to a death so much as something that just ruined the relationship in some other way. It already had the mistake/tragedy of Ivan saying the wrong thing back on page 34, which seemed like it was plenty of a mistake on its own. I'm still trying to figure out the best way to phrase this, but the best I can do is that it felt like piling on. Personally, I think I would have appreciate the tragedy more if either the death OR the relationship fail on 34 happened, since both together sort of made me go "Oh, that's sorta overkill since we already had the mistake and it already had obvious consequences?"
Sorry for kinda rambling here, hopefully there's something useful in the feedback. This comic's the reason I added you to my watchlist, so it'll be interesting seeing what happens next.
That said, I really enjoyed the comic for the most part,even if Isaac's death was sad. It just didn't feel like it was working up to a death so much as something that just ruined the relationship in some other way. It already had the mistake/tragedy of Ivan saying the wrong thing back on page 34, which seemed like it was plenty of a mistake on its own. I'm still trying to figure out the best way to phrase this, but the best I can do is that it felt like piling on. Personally, I think I would have appreciate the tragedy more if either the death OR the relationship fail on 34 happened, since both together sort of made me go "Oh, that's sorta overkill since we already had the mistake and it already had obvious consequences?"
Sorry for kinda rambling here, hopefully there's something useful in the feedback. This comic's the reason I added you to my watchlist, so it'll be interesting seeing what happens next.
Really nice story. I do wish that Ivan was straight maybe so that way it could have shown what a strong bond the brothers have and that they can talk to each other about anything and everything.
The death seemed rushed and anticlimactic but you have already explained yourself for that part.
Ending could have used a good brotherly love kind of moment and for maybe Ivan to tell something meaningful to Gray as to what Ivan has lost and to make sure the same won't happen to his brother.
Honestly I thought Isaac would have died in the ring after a match sometime later.
Overall it was a very good and emotional comic. Thanks for sharing it with us.
The death seemed rushed and anticlimactic but you have already explained yourself for that part.
Ending could have used a good brotherly love kind of moment and for maybe Ivan to tell something meaningful to Gray as to what Ivan has lost and to make sure the same won't happen to his brother.
Honestly I thought Isaac would have died in the ring after a match sometime later.
Overall it was a very good and emotional comic. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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